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Bad habits I'm in holidays now. It's december and anyone thinks that is time to eat a lot of tasty food. But, this holidays I'm really looking foward improving my bad habits, specially the food that I've been eating recently. The last weeks I've been very busy, because of this I've been eating a lot of fast food. But, I be used to eat best food , fruits as well as vegetables. Now I'm looking back to nice days when I used to do exercise twice a week. I need to puck my socks up if I want to improve my habits and became healthier.

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Bad habits

I'm in holidays I am on vacation for the holdiays now. It's december and everyone thinks that it is time to eat a lot of tasty food. But, for the holidays I'm really looking foward to improve my bad habits, especially the food that I've been eating recently.
These last weeks I've been very busy, because of this I've been eating a lot of fast food. But, I am used to eating the best kind of food , fruits as well as vegetables. Now I'm looking back to nice days when I used to do exercise twice a week. I need to puck my socks up if I want to improve my habits and became  become healthier.

 

-On the first line, you can also say "I am on holiday vacation" or"I am off for the holidays".

"I'm in holidays" I haven't seen this expressed this way,it just does not sound right I wish I could expain it in detail.

-On line 4 "this" is singular. "These"  corresponds with "weeks" because its obviously plural.

Good JOB :) A- lol

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Disculpe le mal entendi. Usted si esta en lo bien.
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Disculpe pero eso no es correcto. Totalmante. Aqui el verbo es "looking" No es "Forward" y si "forwarding" seria el caso entoces la oracion no tendria sentido.
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Dos cosas que ninguno te corrigió. Es "Looking forward to improving" Siempre es look forward to+ing. Usualmente, para hablar sobre las vacaciones de la universidad se dice "break". "I'm on my college break"
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I'm ON holidays now. It's december and anyone thinks that is time to eat a lot of tasty food. But, this holidays I'm really looking foRward FOR improving my bad habits, specially the food that I've been eating recently. The last weeks I've been very busy, because of this I've been eating a lot of fast food. But, I AM used to eat BETTER food , fruits as well as vegetables. Now I'm looking back to nice days when I used to do exercise twice a week. I need to puck my socks up if I want to improve my habits and becOme healthier.

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