The summer is coming and I want to escape.

I don't hate the summer. , but It's certainly it's not my favorite season. I have a kind of sun allergy am allergic to the sun, and the peruvian summer is pretty sunny., so t  The entire season is stressful, I'm stressed, trying to avoid the sun.

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Also, I have to use tons of sun protector., because My skin can't stand the sun for many time long without me looking like a Dalmation. turning a Dalmatian dog's skin. Ok, I'm overstating, haha, but If I expose myself to the sun, without sun protection, then on my skin gonna appear white patches, orange patches, and brown patches appear. Not immediately, of course. First, I'll be red., t Then tanned., and f Finally, I look like a patchwork handicraft, work hahaha. However, I'm tanned throughout all the year. Even in the winter, when the Lima's weather is cloudy. , because It is pretty slow and difficult leave my tan. When it's almost gone out, the summer is coming comes again, haha.

(Here we use a staccato rythym, which makes the sentences appear more lively. Again, these edits should have a more conversational, anecdotal feel)

Today, is a hot day. I want to escape to a cold place. But do a A summer volunteer program outside is expensive. Maybe, I should travel to Germany, or Spain where some familiars family lives, but I can't pay the plane ticket.... Broke and in summer: bad lucky. But it could be worse: Broke and in summer and without sun protector hahaha.

(Great paragraph and word usage. The rythym is correct here.)

The summer is coming and I want to escape.

I don't hate the summer, but certainly it's not my favorite season. I have a kind of sun allergy and the Peruvian summer is pretty sunny, so the entire season I'm stressed trying to avoid the sun.

Also, I have to use tons of sunscreen, because my skin can't stand the sun for a long time without turning into a Dalmatian dog's skin. Ok, I'm overstating haha, but If I am exposed to the sun without sunscreen, then my skin will have white patches, orange patches and brown patches. Not immediately, of course. First, I'll be red, then tanned, and finally I look like a patch handicraft work hahaha. However, I'm tanned all the year. Even in winter when the Lima's weather is cloudy, because my tan fades away pretty slowly. When it's almost gone, the summer is coming again haha.

Today is a hot day. I want to escape to a cold place. But doing a summer volunteer program abroad is expensive. Maybe I should travel to Germany or Spain where some relatives live, but I can't pay the plane ticket.... Broke and in summer: bad luck. But it could be worse: Broke and in summer and without sunscreen hahaha.

I guess there are more opportunities to practice English inside!