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Smells Like Teen Spirit
Questioning the infinity and the human being, might be a very entertaining activities, typical of especially for teenagers. However, I'm more interested in the flavor matter of childhood. That age, where you actually you just live day by day, without any regret or guilty.
When I listened to the song of the with this title, there back in the 90's (childish and naive years), I used to pass often by the outside of a cafeteria. I looked inside of it, and with envy I watched to the people between theirs who were between twenty or and thirty years old, that gathering there. I believed that that age were was the perfect age, and I eagerly waited to reached that age, to be one of them. Nevertheless, now, I also have many reasons, all of them powerful enough, as to want to be a child again. But sadly, that is not going to be possible.
Life goes on and I should go together with it, look forward and do my best to be a better person than yesterday. I don't know if the passing of the time have has made me wiser, I just know that they it has not made me happier. Anyway, yearning for the past, it's is also an entertaining activity, but at the same time, it's a double-edged sword if you don't know how to handle it. In the most of the cases it's a wrong step that should be avoided.
Sad but true. I think most of us can relate to these thoughts. When you're a kid, you think you will have life all figured out by the time you're 25, but i guess for most of us, this is not really the case ^^ Thank you, this was a good read :)
Smells Like Teen Spirit
Questioning the infinity and the human being. , might be a A very entertaining activity, typical of teenagers. However, I'm am most interested in the flavor of childhood. That age, where actually you just live day by day, without any regret or guilty.
(These edits change the flavor of this paragraph and may not be what you are looking for. Bring the reader in with "Questioning" - the reader assumes it is you, could be someone else, create intrigue). Using economy of words to emphasize feeling. Using "I am" versus "I'm" for emphasis.)
When I listened the to that song, Smells Like Teen Spirit, of the title, there in the 90's (my childish and naive years), . I used to would often pass often by the outside of a cafeteria, . I looked look inside of it, and watch with envy at I watched to the people between in theirs twenty or thirty years old, twenties and thirties, that gathered there. I believed that that age were was the perfect age, and I eagerly awaited reacheding that age, to be one of them. Nevertheless, Now, I also have many reasons, all of them powerful enough, as to want to be a child again. But Sadly, that is not going to be possible.
(It is possible that the reader may not know the title is a song, so adding the name here could make sense. These edits are meant to bring the reader to that time. To be with you at that moment. May need additional info -> when or why would you often pass by the outside of a cafeteria, or even the name of the cafeteria.)
Life goes on and I should go together with it. , I look forward and do my best to be a better person today than yesterday. I don't know if the passage of the time has ve made me wiser, I just know that they have not it has not made me happier. Anyway, Yearning the past it's also is an entertaining activity, but at the same time, it's a double-edged sword. if you don't know how to handle it. In the most of the cases it's a wrong step that should be avoided.
(Here we conclude. By bring back the "is an entertaining activity" phrase, you have completed a circle. A good technique. "Passage of time" is a metaphor.)
Smells Like Teen Spirit (Nirvana)
Questioning the infinity and the what is a human being, might be a very entertaining activity, typical of teenagers, but However, I'm most interested in the flavor of earlier childhood. That age, where actually you just live day by day, without any regret or guilt.
Those days, when I listened the song of the title, there in the 90's (childish and naive years) I often used to pass often by the outside of a cafeteria, and looking . I looked inside of it, and with envy I watched to the people between in their twenties or thirties years old, that gathered there. I believed that that age were is the perfect age, and I eagerly waited to reached that age and become to be one of them. Nevertheless, now, I also have many reasons (all of them powerful enough) as to want to be a child again. But sadly, that is not going to be possible.
Life goes on and I should go together with it, look forward and do my best to be a better person than yesterday. I don't know if the passage/passing of the time has made me wiser, I just know that they have it has not made me happier. Anyway, yearning for the past, it's also an entertaining activity, but at the same time, it's a double-edged sword - if you don't know how to handle it. In the most of the cases it's a wrong step that should be avoided.
It seems there is a 'Spanish' way of thinking, I wish I knew more about it.
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