Flying
The have lots of living creatures can fly, human are chained on earth thousands of years,in seventies of the last countury,man become interstated in gliders,making flight to reality.they climbed up the hills and leapt into space,gliding alone the mountain slopes.some brave young man adding power engine and propeller to it.at the same time,they are sold some kits and assemble of aircraft with similar tools.now,fiy has become a popular sport.
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Flying
The have lots of living creatures can fly, humans are chained on earth for thousands of years, in the seventies of the last countury,man become interstated in gliders,making flight a reality. They climbed up the hills and leapt into space, gliding alone along the mountain slopes. Some brave young men added power an engine and propeller to it. At the same time, they are sold some kits and assemble of aircraft with similar tools. now, flying has become a popular sport.
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"Last country" => do you mean "in the last century"?
"interstated" is not a word, I tried to look up online. A better word would be "enamoured with gliders, making flight a reality"
Enamoured => in love with something.
"sold some kits and assemble of aircraft with similar tools" => this sentence does not make sense, however do you mean => " Around the same time, aircraft kits could be sold and assembled with similar tools to (something)".
Hope this helps
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