写得很好！我最近在学习西游记。你看过六小龄童演的电视剧吗？

Translation

孙大圣是中国古典文学名著《西游记》中的一个重要人物。他是唐僧的第一个徒弟。其实在中国，他最受欢迎的名字不是“孙大圣”而是“孙悟空”，这是教他72变的第一个师傅给他起的名字。“悟”的意思是“启迪”，“空”的意思是“无”，这是佛学中最重要的一个认识。在佛学中，人必须放弃欲望和所有对财富、名声的渴望，以培养自己为佛。

My Translation:
Sun Dasheng is a very important character of in Journey to the West,which is one of the most famous pieces of Chinese class famous literatures.He is the first apprentice of Monk Tang Monk.While, In China he has another name,"Sun Wukong" that which is more popullarpopular than "Sun Dasheng", and this name is made by his first moaster who taught him the 72 supernormal abilities. "Wu"means that make sense by yourself. "Kong" means "nothing", which has the mostis an important meaningidea in Buddhism. And inIn Buddhism, people must give up their desires and all aspirations about finance and fame to devolope themselves to become the Buddha.

This is my CET-6(a grade of English to chinese college students)practice,can you correct it and help me ?thank you :)