willaniu's notebook entry: Jan 06, 2011
Sam has a dog. The dog is about 2 month old. It does not like alone.When Sam come back from school, the dog follow him everywhere at home. When it is time for sam to study, the dog do not like to leave. It is just like a baby, it smelled and bite Sam's books. It cramp onto Sam's legs and stretch itself.After a while it feel bored and want to have Sam's attention.
Sam make it out of the study room and close the door. It barked outside the door louder and louder untill Sam opened the door again. It creep into the room quickly. Sam criticize it but it barked to Sam angrily. it seems to say do not speak to me this way.If it do sth. wrong and Sam beat it, it will try to bite Sam to show its protest.
It is a naughty dog which is like a two years old boy, and a spoiled dog.
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willaniu's notebook entry: Jan 06, 2011
Sam has a dog. The dog is about 2 month old. It does not like to be alone.When Sam comes back from school, the dog follows him (around) everywhere at home. When it is time for Sam to study, the dog does not like to leave. It is just like a baby, it smells and bites Sam's books. It climbs up on Sam's lap and stretchesSam makes it out of the study room and closes the door. It barks outside the door louder and louder untill Sam opens the door again. It creeps into the room quickly. (creep usually means slow. you probably want 'runs into the room quickly') Sam scolds it but it barks at Sam angrily. it seems to say "do not speak to me this way." If it does something wrong and Sam beats it, it will try to bite Sam to show its protest.
It is a naughty dog which is like a two year-old boy, and a spoiled dog. (redundant - naughty and spoiled are similar)
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willaniu's notebook entry: Jan 06, 2011
Sam has a dog. The dog is about 2 month old. It does not like to be alone.When Sam comes back from school, the dog follows him everywhere at home. When it is time for Sam to study, the dog does not like to leave. It is just like a baby, it smells and bites Sam's books. It jumps onto Sam's lap and stretches his or herself. After a while it gets bored and wants to have Sam's attention.Sam made it out of the study room and closed the door. The dog barked outside the door louder and louder untill Sam opened the door again. It shot into the room quickly. Sam criticized it but it barked to Sam angrily. it seemed to say: "Do not speak to me this way." If it does something wrong wrong and Sam beats it, it will try to bite Sam to show its protest.
It is a naughty and spoiled dog that acts like a two years old boy.
In english, we usually refer to a dog as he (if male) or she (if female), not as it.
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