my home town

There is a beautiful city,it's a famous livable city in China.This city has many stories about rivers,mountains,sculptures and so on.It's in southwest China,and it's a the second biggest city in YunNan. This is my lovely home town QuJing.
Maybe you don't know QuJing, and even don't know YunNan,now I must introduce QuJing for you,and you may be love this city like me.
Weather
Lets talk about weather that you have to know"四季如春"(si ji ru chun).We all have four seasons,:spring,summer,autumn,and winter,but in there QuJing,every season is like spring.haven'tThere is no cold and hot.In the summer you will not sweat,in the winter you also see green trees,couleful colorful flowers. You don't worry have a cold that You don't have to worry about catching a cold if you just wear one T-shirt in the winter.
Food
We always told each other if thay someone likes YunNan they must come to my home town because we have many different foods for them.If you like spicy stuff,we have hot pepper chicken,baked potato. If you don't like spicy food, my fellows will take you to eat native cokie, it's so amazing, And my fellow are very warm and hospitality hospitable.

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my home town

There is a beautiful city,it's a famous livable city in China.This city has many stories about river,mountain,sculpture and so on.It's in southwest China,and it's a second biggest city in YunNan. This is my lovely home town QuJing
Maybe you don't know QuJing even don't know YunNan,now I must introduce QuJing for you,and you may be love this city like me.
Weather
Talk about weather that you have to know"四季如春"(si ji ru chun).we all have four seasons,spring,summer,autumn,winter,but in there,every season like spring.haven't cold and hot.In the summer you will not sweat,in the winter you also see green trees,colorful flowers. You don't worry have a cold that you just wear one T-shirt in the winter.
Food
We always told each other if thay like YunNan they must come to my home town because we have many different food for them.If you like spicy stuff,we have hot pepper chicken,bake potato.If you don't like spicy food,my fellows will take you to eat native cokie,it's so amazing,And my fellow are very warm and hospitality.