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Hello everyone! Could someone correct me this topic, please? Thanks!
Hello Sophie! How are you? I' very busy because last week my family and I moved and we are tying all the things. We moved because my father found a new job.This job is more important than the another job and the salary is higher. My new house is fantastic! It's very big and there are two floor and a big garden. My bedroom is very beautiful and There is a balcony where I can see the sea. I would like you visit me very soon!
I look forward to your answer very soon!
Kisses!
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Hello everyone! Could someone correct me on this topic, please? Thanks!
Hello Sophie! How are you? I'm very busy because last week my family and I moved and we are trying everything. We moved because my father found a new job. This job is more important than his last job and the salary is higher. My new house is fantastic! It's very big and there are two floors and a big garden. My bedroom is very beautiful and there is a balcony where I can see the sea. I would like you to visit me very soon!
I look forward to your answer!
Kisses!
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Hello everyone. ! Could someone correct me this topic, please? Thanks!
Hello Sophie. ! How are you? I'm very busy because on last week my family and I moved to another place and we are trying to fix all the things. We moved because my father found a new job.This job is more important than the another previous job and the salary is higher. My new house is fantastic! It's very big and there are two floor and a big garden. My bedroom is very beautiful and T there is a balcony where I can see the sea. I would like you to visit me in my new home very soon!
I look forward to your reply answer very soon!
Kisses!
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Hello everyone! Could someone correct me this topic, please? Thanks!
Hello Sophie! How are you? I'm very busy because last week my family and I moved and we are tying all the things. We moved because my father found a new job.This job is more important than the another job and the salary is higher. My new house is fantastic! It's very big and there are two floor and a big garden. My bedroom is very beautiful and There is a balcony where I can see the sea. I would like you visit me very soon!
I look forward to your answer very soon!
Kisses!
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