Dear Mr Moore

Greetings !!

My name is Maria Lopez. I am from Madrid and I am 25 years old. I am writing this mail because I am interested in your offer for working in Fox Ltd. I am a final year student of creative design and I would like to be associated with your fast growing company as a trainee (please mention your post). I am studying English and German. I can work in flexible  at 24*7 enviroment . As per your advertisement , you are looking for people those want work and experience in all areas and I would like to know what kind of areas and experience you will need ?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Maria

Mob. ( pleae mention you contact no with country code )

Formal email

Dear Sir Moore:
My name is Maria Lopez, I am from Madrid, and I am  twenty-five years old. I am writing because I am interested in your offer regarding working in Fox Ltd. I am a student of creative design. This year is my last course so I would like to learn in your world famous company. I am studying English and German. I can work  flexible hours all week. In your advertisement you say that you are looking for people who want work experience in all areas and I would like to know what kind of areas and experience you will need.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely, Maria

Good luck with the job,Maria.I changed the word "big" to "world famous" because big is a kind of weak word not very descriptive.

Formal email

Dear Sir Moore:
My name is Maria Lopez, I am twenty-five years old and from Madrid. I am writing because I'm interested in your offer reguarding working at Fox Ltd. I am a creative design student. This year is my last course and I would like to learn in your company. I am studying English and German. I can work flexible hours all week. Your advertisement says that you are looking for people who want work experience in all areas and I would like to know what kind of areas and experience you will need.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely, Maria