a essay for IELTS who can correct it for me,please? Topic: Some people think university educations should prepare students for employment while others think it should help students require theoretical knowledge. Discuss views and give your own opinion. My essay: With the population boom, the competition in job market has become increasingly stiff. Therefore, someone believes that the main aim of higher education is to improve students' employability. However, others argue that students should focus on gaining theoretical knowledge at university. Both of sides will be discussed. Clearly, the purpose of most students attending to university is to improve their competitiveness in future job market. Hence, if university can offer them easily access to employment skills, it is not only beneficial to students' career prospects after graduation, but also may enhance the university's attraction to most people. Furthermore, because of strong support by government, university has a wide view on the whole society which makes it clearly knows what is the most needs in job market. Last, country economy will increase stronger with more good employable graduates, as students are the future of a country. On the other hand, we have to say the merits of theoretical knowledge are also manifested. To start with, theoretical knowledge is the solid foundation of high technologies. Employment skills boost the quality of students' material life, whereas the theoretical knowledge will increase their spiritual life. In addition to this, students who have a good command of theoretical knowledge will perfect well on academic study and research in future and this will definitely advance the improvement of our country's economy, technology etc.. In conclusion, university should provide different students who have different requirements with a variety of courses. Only do this, can students fulfill their potential.