Do you think the external look may indicate an important information about a person? Hello everybody. I wrote the following passage and would really like to know what do you think about this topic, do you agree or disagree with me? Also, if there is someone on here who can help me to find out if I committed some errors and help me correct them, I will be truly grateful. Thank you!! My entry: In my opinion, external appearance won't provide any important information about a person. A lot has been said about people's appearances and the importance of it. The magazines, the television channels, ads, billboards are all telling us how we should look, weigh, exercise, dress and so on. Almost nobody mentions the fact that we all own more important thing that would tell us such more about a person - the soul. Hence, my point of view is that believing that the external appearance might tell you anything valuable about a person, would be an enormous mistake. By believing this you help the media decide for us what kind of view we want to have, what type of friends we want to meet, what sort of society we are. All things considered, I'd give each person the opportunity to be my friend via anything but appearance. The End.