A world leader that I admire

Who is a world leader that you admire? What are characteristics that make that person a great leader?

A world leader,like a cook, doctor, or plumber, is firstly a job. Whether one can be considered a great world leader should be largely dependent on how well he has done his job. In other words, the prosperity of his country, the better his performance. Also, despite of a world of different cultures and values, to what extent the people of his country value humanity, peace, love for truth and other universal virtues should be put into consideration as well.

If you view the world in the perspective of economic development, it's objective to say U.S is the dominant one. For U.S's leading place now, one can never neglect the leadership of early presidents of America. Among them, Thomas Jefferson, the third president of America, is a great world leader I admire. 

Thomas Jefferson is known as the statesman of science. In fact, his love for science was at first a private one, but later by his actions he made this an American love for truth.
Jefferson invented the best plough at the time. It may not seem important now, but by then agriculture had the biggest share in the economy. Jefferson also helped invent a new way to excavate archaeological sites. Now some important archaeological findings are discovered by the way first devised by Jefferson.

Later, when the highest scientific institutions in America made Jefferson their president, Jefferson claimed it was the most flattering honor he'd ever gotten. There was a period of time when he was both president of that institution and the U.S. Obviously he has merged his love for science and his love for the country. He did a more than good job in propaganda for science by bridging American scientists with other nations, also by spreading the latest news on science through governmental routes.

I appreciate Thomas Jefferson's genuine efforts to promote science in the early years and I think America has since then benefited from that, and will always benefit from his efforts. There has always been war on the earth and it is inevitable. Of humanity, peace and love for truth, I value the last one the most. That's why I consider Thomas Jefferson to be a great world leader.

I like the conclusion! It's just important to continue practicing the correct use of the tenses in English a little more.

A world leader that I admire

Who is a world leader that you admire? What are characteristics that make that person a great leader?

World leader,like cook, doctor, plumber, is firstly a job. Whether one can be considered a great world leader should be largely dependent on how well he has done his job. In other words, the more prosperous his country is , the better his performance. Also, despite of a world of different cultures and values, to what extent the people of his country value humanity, peace, love for truth and other universal virtues, should be put into consideration as well.
If you view the world in the perspective in the economic development, it's objective to say U.S is the dominant one. For U.S's leading place now, one can never neglect the leadership of early presidents of America. Among them, Thomas Jefferson,the third president of America, is a great world leader I admire.
Thomas Jefferson is known as the statesman of science. In fact, his love for science is at first a private one, but later by his actions he made this an American love for truth.
Jefferson invented the best plough at the time. It may not seem important now, but by then agriculture was the biggest share in economy. Jefferson also helped invent a new way to excavate archaeological sites. Now some important archaeological findings are discovered by the way first devised by Jefferson.
Later, when the highest scientific institution in America made Jefferson their president, Jefferson claimed it was the most flattering honor he's ever got. There was a period of time when he was both president of that institution and the U.S. Obviously he has merged his love for science and his love for the country. He did a more than good job in propaganda for science by bridging American scientists with other nations', also by spreading latest news on science through governmental routes.
I appreciate Thomas Jefferson's genuine efforts to promote science in the early years and I think America has since then benefited from that , and will always be. There have always been war on the earth and sometimes inevitable. Say humanity, peace and love for truth, I value the last one most.That's why I consider Thomas Jefferson to be a great world leader.

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A world leader that I admire

Who is a world leader that you admire? What are characteristics that make that person a great leader?

World leader,like cook, doctor, plumber, is firstly a job. Whether one can be considered a great world leader should be largely dependent on how well he has done his job. In other words, the more prosperity of his country , the better his performance. Also, despite of a world of different cultures and values, to what extent the people of his country value humanity, peace, love for truth and other universal virtues, should be put into consideration as well.
If you view the world in the perspective in the economic development, it's objective to say U.S is the dominant one. For U.S's leading place now, one can never neglect the leadership of early presidents of America. Among them, Thomas Jefferson,the third president of America, is a great world leader I admire.
Thomas Jefferson is known as the statesman of science. In fact, his love for science is at first a private one, but later by his actions he made this an American love for truth.
Jefferson invented the best plough at the time. It may not seem important now, but by then agriculture was the biggest share in economy. Jefferson also helped invent a new way to excavate archaeological sites. Now some important archaeological findings are discovered by the way first devised by Jefferson.
Later, when the highest scientific institution in America made Jefferson their president, Jefferson claimed it was the most flattering honor he's ever got. There was a period of time when he was both president of that institution and the U.S. Obviously he has merged his love for science and his love for the country. He did a more than good job in propaganda for science by bridging American scientists with other nations', also by spreading latest news on science through governmental routes.
I appreciate Thomas Jefferson's genuine efforts to promote science in the early years and I think America has since then benefited from that , and will always be. There have always been war on the earth and sometimes inevitable. Say humanity, peace and love for truth, I value the last one most.That's why I consider Thomas Jefferson to be a great world leader.

(About 370words)

A world leader that I admire

Who is a world leader that you admire? What are characteristics that make that person a great leader?

World leader,like cook, doctor, plumber, is firstly a job. Whether one can be considered a great world leader should be largely dependent on how well he has done his job. In other words, the prosperity of his country , the better his performance. Also, despite of a world of different cultures and values, to what extent the people of his country value humanity, peace, love for truth and other universal virtues, should be put into consideration as well.
If you view the world in the perspective in the economic development, it's objective to say U.S is the dominant one. For U.S's leading place now, one can never neglect the leadership of early presidents of America. Among them, Thomas Jefferson,the third president of America, is a great world leader I admire.
Thomas Jefferson is known as the statesman of science. In fact, his love for science is at first a private one, but later by his actions he made this an American love for truth.
Jefferson invented the best plough at the time. It may not seem important now, but by then agriculture was the biggest share in economy. Jefferson also helped invent a new way to excavate archaeological sites. Now some important archaeological findings are discovered by the way first devised by Jefferson.
Later, when the highest scientific institution in America made Jefferson their president, Jefferson claimed it was the most flattering honor he's ever got. There was a period of time when he was both president of that institution and the U.S. Obviously he has merged his love for science and his love for the country. He did a more than good job in propaganda for science by bridging American scientists with other nations', also by spreading latest news on science through governmental routes.
I appreciate Thomas Jefferson's genuine efforts to promote science in the early years and I think America has since then been benefited from that , and will always be. There have always been war on the earth and sometimes inevitable. Say humanity, peace and love for truth, I value the last one most.That's why I consider Thomas Jefferson to be a great world leader.

(About 370words)