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friendship i amlucky to have some consistent friends during my life. as a 20-year old girl,i have suffered many pains and obstacles, which shaped my character to be independent and strong-minded.however i didn treasure them until last year. when i went to university,i have kept.myself occupied, i am busy doing my own affairs. when didn i say hi to them?what are u busy for?gradually i realize if this continued,i would lose them.so i begin to call them,send gifts during festivals.they said they never forget me,knowing i am busy,they dont wantto disturb me .we seem reown our friendship. on the way pursuing my dream, sometimes i feel lonely, i admit i am fragile. until now i know if i put these friends in my heart, talking to them when i am down.i feel more passionate and persistent.cause i want to know一i am lucky to be friends with nicky.

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I am lucky to have had some consistent friends during my life. As a 20-year old girl, I have suffered many much pain and many obstacles, which shaped my character to be independent and strong-minded willed. However, I didn't treasure them until last year. When I went to university, I have kept myself occupied, i am busy doing with my own affairs. When My friends wanted to know why I didn't i say hi to them and what are u I was busy for with. Gradually, I realized if this continued, I would lose them. So I begin began to call them and send gifts during festivals. They said they never forget forgot me, and that they knowing knew I am was busy, so they dont didn't want to disturb me. We seem reown renewed our friendship. 
On the way to pursuing my dreams, sometimes I feel lonely and I admit I am fragile. Until Now I know if I put these friends in my heart, talking to them when I am down, I will feel more passionate and persistent. cause I want to know remind myself I am lucky to be friends with Nicky.

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I am lucky to have had some consistent friends during my life. As a 20-year old girl, I have suffered many much pain and many obstacles, which shaped my character to be independent and strong-minded willed. However, i didn't treasure them until last year. When I went to university, i have kept myself occupied, i am busy doing with my own affairs. When My friends wanted to know why I didn't i say hi to them and what are u I was busy for with. Gradually, I realized if this continued, I would lose them. So I begin began to call them and send gifts during festivals. They said they never forget forgot me, and that they knowing knew I am was busy, so they dont didn't want to disturb me. We seem reown renewed our friendship. 
 On the way to pursuing my dreams, sometimes I feel lonely and I admit I am fragile. Until Now I know if I put these friends in my heart, talking to them when I am down, I will feel more passionate and persistent. cause I want to know remind myself I am lucky to be friends with Nicky.

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