Street Performers

There are street performers in Belo Horizonte. They are usually kids or teenagers (for the most part boys) who juggle when the traffic light is red. Some of them paint their faces and wear clown clothes. The drivers are the public (the public consists of drivers). Some generous drivers who appreciate their juggling give them money but others don't take any notice of them. These drivers don't react positively and obviously don't find their juggling so entertaining. Yet, nobody shouts rude comments at them. In my opinion, it is not right for kids to be juggling because they should be going to school and preparing themselves for a future with more opportunities.

Street Performers

There are street performers in Belo Horizonte.They are usually kids or teenagers (for the most part boys) who juggle when the traffic light is red. Some of them paint their faces and wear clown clothes.The drivers are the public. [I did not understand what this means.] Some generous drivers who appreciate their juggling give them money but others don't take any notice of them.This These drivers don't react positively and obviously don't find their juggling so entertaining. Yet, nobody shouts rude comments at them.In my opinion, it is not right for kids to be juggling because they should be going to school and preparing themselves for a future with more opportunities.

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