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I'm a sleepyhead.
Yesterday I had no class, So I watched TV untill 04:00 am today. ( I m guessing since yesterday is the day which is gone)
Today morning, when I woke up I felt so tired. I couldnt get up.
I think It's OK since I have no class today as well hence I m sleeping.
When I got up , the time is 15:00.
Oh my god...
I sleep too much.
I am a sleepyhead. (ㅠ.ㅠ)
I'm a sleepyhead
Today I have no class, so I am watched the TV until 04:00 this morning yesterday.
Today morning, When I woke up this morning I felt so tired, I couldn't quite get wide awake from sleep. (you said you woke up)/
I think.. It's OK because I have no class today.
I am keep sleeping.. ... so I went back to sleep!
When I got up the from bed, oh no~ the time is 15:00 3pm.
Oh my god...
I slept too long much.
I am such a sleepyhead. (ㅠ.ㅠ)
I'm a sleepyhead
1. Use period "." to indicate that you are done with your sentence.
Today I have no class, So I am watched the TV untill 04:00 yesterday.
1. Put a comma to indicate a pause. [Today,...]
2. [I don't have any class.] Is much better to use. You can see in my correction that I put a period in the end. Usually when your using "so" in your next sentence or word, it ends in period. (Hope you get my point)
3. Remove "am."
4. Until is the correct spelling. It is not double "l."
* Your english in this sentence is improving. Great job!
Today morning, when I wake up I feel so tired. I can't awake from sleep.
1. I think "This morning..." is much better to you than "Today morning." For me, it sounds redundant. -- repetition of words in a sentence
2. Use "woke" instead of wake. Because woke is already in the past tense of the verb.
3. "I can't woke up from sleeping." As I already said, use woke because it is already in the past tense.
I think.. It's OK because I have no class today.
1. [I think,...] is used.
I am keep sleeping..
* Actually I don't get your point here. But let me base it on the sentence above.
[I want to sleep.]
When I get up the bed, oh no~ the time is 15:00.
[When I get up from the bed, oh no~ (or you may use comma) the time is already 15:00.]
Oh my god...
I sleep too much.
I am a sleepyhead. (ㅠ.ㅠ)
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