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The story about my Kitten Hello ) I have a kitten. His breed is British Blue Cat. His name is Sem. He is 6 month and he likes to play very much. When we brought him to our house he began to play and run around the house, he was not afraid of anything. We were happy. He is very brave kitten. At first night when he was in our house he didn’t understand what happened with him, he had separated with his mother and began to cry. I was lying on my bed while he was standing and crying on the floor. I felt soul hurt for him ((( But I and my mother agreed not to allow him to be on the bed because he can get used and sleep on bed. In spite of this I took him. He composed and fell asleep. Now he doesn’t like to sleep in the bed, he prefers floor, carpet or window-sill ) He likes to come in the morning, wake me up and churr, he wants that I stroke him. He is very affectionate kitten but at the time when he wants. He allows to stroke him only three minutes and then starts playing and biting. He is inquisitive. He likes new toys, boxes, to catch me suddenly and he is not afraid water. We love him.

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The story about my Kitten

Hello )

I have a kitten. His breed is a British Blue Cat. His name is Sem. He is 6 months old and he likes to play very much. When we brought him to our house he began to play and run around the house, he was not afraid of anything. We were happy. He is a very brave kitten.
At The first night when he was in our house he didn’t understand what happened with him, he had been separated with from his mother and he began to cry.
I was lying on my bed while he was standing and crying on the floor. I felt soul hurt sorry for him, but I and my mother and I had agreed not to allow him to be on the bed because he can could get used and to sleeping on the bed.
In spite of this I took him. He composed calmed down (or relaxed) and fell asleep.
Now he doesn’t like to sleep in the bed, he prefers the floor, carpet or window-sill. 
He likes to come in the morning, wake me up and churr purr, he wants that I stroke me to pet him.
He is a very affectionate kitten, but only on his terms (or only when he wants to be.) but at the time when he wants. He allows to stroke him only three minutes and then starts playing and biting.
He is inquisitive. He likes new toys, boxes, to catch me suddenly and he is not afraid water. We love him.

 

Very good, only a few minor errors! Sem seems like a very cute cat! I love cats. :-)

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The story about my Kitten

Hello )

I have a kitten. His breed is British Blue Cat. His name is Sem. He is 6 months and he likes to play very much. When we brought him to our house he began to play and run around the house, he was not afraid of anything. We were happy. He is a very brave kitten.
The first night he was in our house, he didn’t understand what had happened with him, he had separated from his mother and began to cry.
I was lying on my bed while he was sitting on the floor crying. I felt sorry for him ((( But my mother and I agreed not to allow him to be on the bed because he can get used to it and sleep on the bed.
In spite of this, I took him. He composed and fell asleep.
Now he doesn’t like to sleep on the bed, he prefers the floor, a carpet or a window-sill )
He likes to come in the morning, wake me up and churr, he wants me to stroke him.
He is a very affectionate kitten, but whenever he wants. He lets me to stroke him only three minutes and then starts playing and biting.
He is inquisitive. He likes new toys, boxes, to catch me suddenly and he is not afraid of water. We love him.

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