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I need help ! Someone could correct the text below ASAP? Good morning Ruth, thank you for you e-mail. I'm sorry but I work in the place where's no phone connection. I've day off on Friday so we can talk by phone or we could arrange an interwiev for that day. I'm very inetersted in the position. I've graduated in French at the Univeristy and I passed DALF on level C1. I rode a description you've sent me and I found out that I'm suitable person for the position. I provided support to the Suisse market. As you noticed in my CV I had many responsabilities but one of those was Customer Service so I've already worked with CRM and I know this techonology quite well. I'm not sure which tool the company use for data entry but I used to work with SAP. Thank you in advance for informing me about the next steps in recruitment process. I'm avaible upon request.

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I need help ! Someone could correct the text below ASAP?

Good morning Ruth,

Thank you for your e-mail. I'm sorry but I work in a place wherein no phone connection. I will have day off on Friday so we can talk by phone or we could arrange an interview for that day.
I'm very interested in the position. I've graduated in French at the Univeristy and I passed DALF on level C1. I read the description you've sent me and I found out that I'm suitable person for the position. I provided support to the Suisse market. As you noticed in my CV I had many responsibilities but one of those was Customer Service, so I've already worked with CRM and I know this techonology quite well. I'm not sure which tool does the company use for data entry but I used to work with SAP.

Thank you in advance for informing me about the next steps in recruitment process. I'm avaible upon request.

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I need help ! Could someone correct the text below ASAP?

Good morning Ruth,

Thank you for you e-mail. I am sorry but I work in the place where there is no phone connection. I have a day off on Friday so we can talk by phone or we could arrange an interview for that day.
I'm very inetersted in the position. I have graduated in French (at the Univeristy) and I have passed DALF on at level C1. I rode have read a the description you've sent me and I have found out that I am (the most) suitable person for this position. I have provided support to the Suisse Swiss market. As you might have noticed in my CV, I had many responsabilities but one of those was Customer Service. so I've already worked with experience with CRM (and I know this techonology quite well). I'm not sure which tool the company use for data entry but. I used to work with SAP (in our company).

Thank you in advance for informing me about the (next steps in) recruitment process. I am avaible upon request.

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I need help ! Someone could correct the text below ASAP?

Good morning Ruth,

Thank you for your e-mail. I'm sorry but I work in a place wherein  no phone connection. I will have day off on Friday so we can talk by phone or we could arrange an interview for that day.
I'm very interested in the position. I've graduated in French at the University and I passed DALF on level C1. I read the description you've sent me and I found out that I'm suitable for the position. I provided support to the Suisse market. As you noticed in my CV, I had many responsibilities but one of those was being a Customer Service so I've already worked with CRM and I know this technology quite well. I'm not sure which tool does the company use for data entry but I used to work with SAP.

Thank you in advance for informing me about the next steps in recruitment process. I'm avaible upon request.

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I need help ! Someone could correct the text below ASAP?

Good morning Ruth,

thank you for your e-mail. I'm sorry but I am working in the place where's there is no phone connection. I've day off on Friday so we can talk by phone or we could arrange an interwiev for that day.
I'm very inetersted in the position. I've graduated in French at the Univeristy and I passed DALF on level C1. I rode a description you've sent me and I found out that I'm suitable person for the position. I provided support to the Suisse market. As you noticed in my CV I had many responsabilities but one of those was Customer Service so I've already worked with CRM and I know this techonology quite well. I'm not sure which tool the company is using for data entry but I used to work with SAP.

Thank you in advance for making me know about the next steps in recruitment process. I'm avaible upon request.

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I need help ! Someone correct the text below ASAP?

Good morning Ruth,

thank you for you e-mail. I'm sorry but I work in a place where there is  no phone connection. I've a day off on Friday so we can talk by phone or we can arrange an interwiev for that day.
I'm very inetersted in the position. I've graduated in French at the Univeristy and I passed DALF on level C1. I have read  the  description you've sent me and I think I'm fit  for the position. I provided support to the Suisse market. As you noticed in my resume I had many responsabilities but one of those was Customer Service so I've already worked with CRM and I know this techonology quite well. I'm not sure which tool the company use for data entry but I used to work with SAP.

Thank you in advance for informing me about the next steps in recruitment process. I'm available upon request.

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