The necessity sharpness the wit
. Two years ago I decided study video and photography. I think this subjects are my true vocation. I study really hard , and i was too hopeful with this. I was did my laboral practices in tv like a ENG cameramen. I was really happy fot this , but when my agreement finished I wasn´t continue working in this company. Six months later I am unemployed and I am working like a irregular freelance. I am starting creating my web page of video and photography. I have my own style based on a "Underground music" (Rap , reggae, R&B,...). I would like in a future know unknown singers from a lot of parts of the world and makes videoclips , photos , etc together.
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The necessity sharpness the wit
Two years ago I decided to study video and photography. I think this these subjects are my true vocation. I studied really hard , and I was too very hopeful with about this. I was did my laboral practices in TV like as an ENG cameramen. I was really happy fot with this, but when my agreement finished I wasn´t continued to working in this company. Six months later I am unemployed and I am working like as an irregular freelance. I am starting have started creating my web page of video and photography. I have my own style based on an "Underground music" (Rap , reggae, R&B,...). I would like in a the future know to meet unknown singers from a lot of many parts of the world and make videoclips , photos , etc together.
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The necessity sharpness the wit
Two years ago I decided study video and photography. I think this subjects are my true vocation. I study really hard , and i was too hopeful with this. I was did my laboral practices in tv like a ENG cameramen. I was really happy fot this , but when my agreement finished I wasn´t continue working in this company. Six months later I am unemployed and I am working like a irregular freelance. I am starting creating my web page of video and photography. I have my own style based on a "Underground music" (Rap , reggae, R&B,...). I would like in a future will meet unknowns singers from a lot of parts of the world and makes videoclips , photos , etc...
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I don't understand the last lines and there is the mistakes of punctuation, I didn't correct them because I am also a learner.
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The necessity sharpness the wit
. Two years ago I decided to study video and photography. I think these subjects are my true vocation. I study really hard , and i was too hopeful with this. I did my laboral practices in tv like a ENG cameramen. I was really happy for this , but when my agreement finished I wasn´t continue working in this company. Six months later I am unemployed and I am working like a irregular freelance. I starting creating my web page of video and photography. I have my own style based on a "Underground music" (Rap , reggae, R&B,...). I would like in a future know unknown singers from a lot of parts of the world and makes videoclips , photos , etc together.
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