Bad luck.

I woke up through from a hard sharp pain throughout the my body. I opened my eyes and saw a nurse, which who stayed stood near my bed. 

"Mr. Fujima," she said, "You are lucky, you managed to survive after the bombing of Hirosima two days ago. And now you are in the hospital, you have nothing more life-threatening." 
Almost dead alive of weakness, I asked: 

"Where is me am I?" 
"In Nagasaki," she answered.

*We usually say "sharp pain" 

*You could say, "Barely alive, I asked" 

It sounds like a good introduction to a short story!

Bad luck.

I woke up with hard pain throughout the body. I opened my eyes and saw a nurse, who stood by my bed.
- Mr. Fujima, - she said, - You are lucky, you managed to survive after bombing Hiroshima two days ago. And now you are in the hospital, nothing is threatening you anymore. (You are not at risk anymore) 
Half-dead from weakness, I asked:
- Where am I?
- You are in Nagasaki, - she answered.

Как то так :-)