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A Strong Mom I was at a cafe on my break when I heard a boy crying out. The boy apparently asked his mom to buy a toy, but she said no, so he started crying. Although his mother calmly told me to be quiet at first, she eventually started saying it more and more firmly because he wouldn't stop crying. He tried talking back to no avail, and the way he wriggled in protest was so funny that I couldn't help but laugh. At last, the little boy, screaming and kicking, dragged out of the cafe by his mother! I see kids like that all the time, but I think most mothers would probably give in. What a strong mom!

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A Strong Mom

I was at a cafe on my break when I heard a boy crying out. The boy apparently asked his mom to buy a toy, but she said no, so he started crying. Although his mother calmly told me him to be quiet at first, she eventually started saying it more and more firmly because he wouldn't stop crying. He tried talking back to no avail, and the way he wriggled in protest was so funny that I couldn't help but laugh. At last, the little boy, screaming and kicking, was dragged out of the cafe by his mother!

I see kids like that all the time, but I think most mothers would probably have given in. What a strong mom!

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A Strong Mom

I was at a cafe on during my break when I heard a boy crying out. The boy had apparently asked his mom to buy a toy, but she  had refused said no, so he started crying. Although his mother calmly told me him to be quiet at first, she was eventually started saying it more and more firmly because he wouldn't stop crying. He tried talking back to no avail, and the way he wriggled in protest was so funny that I couldn't help but laugh. At last, the little boy, screaming and kicking, was dragged out of the cafe by his mother!

I see kids like that all the time, but I think most mothers would probably give in. What a strong mom!

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That's an interesting story, but as far as corrections I think Stephanie pretty much nailed it

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