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Television series Today ,I would like to talk about my favorite television series ,It's easy because this television series is the more popular of the world. First ,I looked it in the original language with down the translation ,after I l looked back in french ,his name is Game of thrones ,there are some scenes very hard but the story is very interesting , you never don't guess the end ,full of surprises in this series ,I can not tell you more because I could spent there the complete day to speak about that,really if you have never seen it ,I advise it to you. Thank you very much for any corrections. Didier

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Television series

Today ,I would like to talk about my favorite television series ,It's easy because this television series is the more most popular of in the world. First ,I looked it in the original language with down the translation french subtitles , and afterwards I l looked back watched it again in french ,his name It is called Game of thrones ,there are some scenes that are very hard to watch but the story is very interesting , you would never don't guess the ending ,this series is full of surprises in this series ,I can will not tell you more because I could spent there the complete day to speaking about that it,really if you have never seen it ,I advise recommend it to you.

Thank you very much for any corrections.
Didier

 

Very easy to undestand, just some changes to make it sound more natural.

I'm not sure, but I think we use advise when we talk about doing something (verb), and recommend something (noun). So you could say "I advise you watch this show" or "I recommend this show"

 

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Television series

Today ,I would like to talk/tell you about my favorite television series. It's easy because this television series is very well known and popular around the world.

I watched it in English first with French subtitles, then i rewatched it in French.

The name of the series/programme is called 'Game of Thrones'. I find some of the scenes difficult to watch/understand, but the storyline is very interesting because you can never guess the ending/what will happen in the end. The series is full of surprises. I won't tell you any more about the series because i honestly could go on all day telling you about it because i really love it so much. If you haven't seen it/checked it out yet (informal) I highly reccomend you do as i am sure you would love it.
Thank you very much for any corrections.
Didier

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AHAH!! I can't wait for the new season

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