Technology & relationships
Please correct my essay. I currently study English for IELTS test.
Question :
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of tecnology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development.
My Answer:
Nowadays, a lot of people use recent released electronic devices for having a catch up with their friends so that they can easily contact with each other even though they are far away. In my opinion, I am very positive about this phenomenon.
There are couple of side-effects when we have a conversation with others through the smart devices. Since it is extremly easy to contact with others, the device is frequently rining every single time unlikely we want to be or need to be more concentrated on. We communicate only through the smart devices so that it becomes that we do not see each other anymore rather that the past. It is going to make us dreary in the way of psychically.
However, there are obviously benefits to make us more convinience. It is very helpful to get reach the people who currently without having a catch-up. In addition, if we are in trouble with a long distance to get reach, we can communicate without any problem apart from that we are in the region of unreceivable of the waves. Last but not least, we can share our own ideas, favorates, recent private news via smart devices. It is also helpful to improve our socialization ability. And we can easily access the information of our interests through this activities.
For the reasons mentioned above, there are absolutely heaps of benefits for people to interact with each other. It make us link with more people than the past. I look forward to be able to use the smart devices with more cutting-edge technology as more comfortably in the future.
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