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a few about my country! this is my second time writing... today I´m going to write a few about my country. I´m from Chile, it is a very diverse country becasue we have the most arid desert in the world and very cute forest. I prefer the forest because I like the colors in the nature and in the forest I can find many colors and also I like the smell of tree! The capital of Chile is santiago city. I live here but I don´t like because the people are very stressed, obviusly the are very nice people but I prefer the people from other cities. I can´t write more because I must study, the next thuesday I have a test :( another day I continue writing about my country. Regards!

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Alejandra, It sounds odd to say "a cute forest". It is not incorrect, just sounds strange. It would be better to say "We have very beautiful forests" or "very lush forests". It probably sounds like if I were to say "Yo quiero un cerveza". Just my thoughts....
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A few things about my country!

This is my second time writing... today I´m going to write a few things about my country. I´m from Chile. It is a very diverse country becasue we have the most arid desert in the world and a very cute forest.
I prefer the forest because I like the colors of nature and in the forest, I can find many colors. Also, I like the smell of trees!
The capital of Chile is santiago city. I live here but I don´t like it because the people are very stressed. Obviously, they are very nice people but I prefer the people from other cities.
I can´t write more because I must study as I have a test next Thursday. :(
On another day, I will continue writing about my country.
Regards!

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A few facts about my country!

This is my second time writing... today I´m going to write a few facts about my country. I´m from Chile. It is a very diverse country becasue we have the most arid desert in the world and a very cute forest.
I prefer the forest because I like the colors in the nature, and it is there that I can find many colors. I also enjoy the smell of trees!
The capital of Chile is Santiago City. I live there, but I don´t like it because the people are very stressed. Obviously, they are very nice people, but I prefer people from other cities.
I can´t write more because I need to study.I have a test next Thursday. :(
On another day I will continue writing about my country, regards!

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