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Hello!
Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is to practice my English. I never have made any english I've never taken an English course before,. i I just listening listen to musics, watch movies and play games.
Because of that, my English grammar is not good, and I have some difficulties in with many verbs.
Today, in this notebook, I will write about me and all the stufs stuff I do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.
I'm a mechanical engineering student, have I'm twenty seven years old and now, I'm searching for an internship in a big company. The English language is required for all big companies, so, I need to learn it!
I have a girlfriend, who is also an engineering student to. In my free time, I like play mountainbike mountain biking, traveling and cooking.
I like to go in the gym and now i start to play/fight boxe I'm starting to box.
Thank's Thanks
Good job. Some tips:
1. The word "English" and the pronoun "I" must always be capitalized, wherever they appear.
2. Never use the verb "to have" for age. Use "to be."
Hello!
Hi everybody, my name is Raphael, and my goal here is to practice my english. I never have never made attended/taken any english courses, i just listening to musics, watch movies and playing games.
Because of that, my english grammar is not good, and i have some difficulties in with many verbs.
Today, in this notebook, i will write about me and all the stuffs I do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.
I'm a mechanical engineering student. have I am twenty seven years old, and now I'm searching for an internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so i need to learn!
I have a girlfriend, an engineering student too. In my free time i like play to mountain bike, travel and cooking.
I like to go in the gym and now i have now started to play/ boxing.
Thanks
Notes:
Too= As well, and usually goes at the end of the sentence.
You use to before verbs, to have, to go, to sleep :P
Very nicely done though :)
Hello!
Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is to practice my english. I have never taken any english courses. i just listen to music, watch movies and play games.
Because of that, my english grammar is not good; i have some difficulties in many verbs.
Today, in this notebook, i will write about myself and all the stuff i do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.
I'm a mechanical engineering student. i am twenty seven years old. now, i'm searching for an internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so, i need to learn!
I have a girlfriend who is an engineering student too. in my free time, i like to mountain bike, travel and cook.
I also like to go to the gym and now i have started to do boxing.
Thanks.
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