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Hello! Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is pratice my english. I never have made any english course, i just listening musics, watch movies an play games. Because that, my english grammar is not good, i have some difficulties in many verbs. Today, in this notebook, i will write about me and all the stufs i do. If you see anything wrong, let me know. I'm a mechanical engineering student, have twenty seven years and now, i'm searching for a internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so, i need to learn! I have a girlfriend, engineer student to, in my free time i like play mountainbike, travel and cooking. I like to go in the gym and now i start to play/fight boxe. Thank's

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Hello!

Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is to practice my English. I never have made any english I've never taken an English course before,. i I just listening listen to musics, watch movies and play games.
Because of that, my English grammar is not good, and I have some difficulties in with many verbs.

Today, in this notebook, I will write about me and all the stufs stuff I do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.

I'm a mechanical engineering student, have I'm twenty seven years old and now, I'm searching for an internship in a big company. The English language is required for all big companies, so, I need to learn it!

I have a girlfriend, who is also an engineering student to. In my free time, I like play mountainbike mountain biking, traveling and cooking.
I like to go in the gym and now i start to play/fight boxe I'm starting to box.

Thank's Thanks

Good job. Some tips:

1. The word "English" and the pronoun "I" must always be capitalized, wherever they appear.

2. Never use the verb "to have" for age. Use "to be."

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Hello!

Hi everybody, my name is Raphael, and my goal here is to practice my english. I never have never made attended/taken any english courses, i just listening to musics, watch movies and playing games.
Because of that, my english grammar is not good, and i have some difficulties in with many verbs.

Today, in this notebook, i will write about me and all the stuffs I do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.

I'm a mechanical engineering student. have I am twenty seven years old, and now I'm searching for an internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so i need to learn! 


I have a girlfriend, an engineering student too. In my free time i like play to mountain bike, travel and cooking.
I like to go in the gym and now i have now started to play/ boxing.

Thanks

 

Notes:

Too= As well, and usually goes at the end of the sentence. 

You use to before verbs, to have, to go, to sleep :P

Very nicely done though :)

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Hello!

Hi everybody, my name is Raphael and my goal here is to practice my english. I have never taken any english courses. i just listen to music, watch movies and play games.
Because of that, my english grammar is not good; i have some difficulties in many verbs.

Today, in this notebook, i will write about myself and all the stuff i do. If you see anything wrong, let me know.

I'm a mechanical engineering student. i am twenty seven years old. now, i'm searching for an internship in a big company. The english language is required for all big companies, so, i need to learn!

I have a girlfriend who is an engineering student too. in my free time, i like to mountain bike, travel and cook.
I also like to go to the gym and now i have started to do boxing.

Thanks.

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