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My beloved dog! My dog's name is Argos. He weights 60 pounds , wich are mainly composed of yellow, soft fur <3 He's a very quiet dog and he's also very kind. He loves to play outside and sleep under my bed, when he's really tired he even snores all night long. Althought he's very quiet and gentle, he's not good for kids because he can be very affectionate and he can throw them to the floor. He is very smart, he does plenty of tricks (all of them for food) and everytime I'm sad he cheers me up. You can annoy him while sleeping, eating or playing but DO NOT grab his tail or leg when his under the bed, he won't bite but he makes this really scary growl. He just hates to be bottered when he's under any bed. Well, that's it :)

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My beloved dog!

My dog's name is Argos. He weighs 60 pounds, which is mainly composed of yellow, soft (the adjective order sounds better the other way round, 'soft, yellow') fur <3 He's a very quiet dog and he's also very kind. He loves to play outside and sleep under my bed, when he's really tired he even snores all night long. Although he's very quiet and gentle, he's not good with kids because he can be very affectionate and he can throw them to the floor. He is very smart, he does plenty of tricks (all of them for food) and everytime I'm sad he cheers me up.

You can annoy him while sleeping, eating or playing but DO NOT grab his tail or leg when he is under the bed, he won't bite but he makes this really scary growl. He just hates to be bothered when he's under any bed. Well, that's it :)

 

Better late than never I guess. Does Argos mean anything? I say that because it is the name of a chain of shops in the United Kingdom, so it made me laugh a little bit. Not many errors there, well done.

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Why didn't anybody correct this book entry? :(

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