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Action in The Cage.
I went to paintball with my collegues colleagues last weekend. I know the rules and how to play how to play and rules because I had have played before.(pYou can use the past perfect but I think present perfect is better in this sentence) The beginning of the match was a warm up round. We shot each other from long range and we rarely got out from covered area. Then I, who was leader of team, decided to rush attack from the left wings for a direct attack (on the) to flag. I told my team the plan my plan to team friends. and they said “OK”.
The referee started the round and I ran to the left wing. Then I looked at my friends, they were staying at still on the back line ! This was like a betrayal.
Then I looked at the enemy flag and took a deep breath. And I started to run from leng(?) wing to the flag. An enemy spotted me so I hit him and he couldn’t hit me. Then I continued to run and I spotted another enemy another enemy spotted, again I hit him before could he hit me. And At that time, I was behind of the enemy line.
All of the enemy were yelling “ Hit him, hit him”. But they were so too late. I touched the capture while I was falling down as I fell down
The score was ours. I like paintball. ;)
Action in The Cage.
I went to go paintballing with my collegues last weekend. I knew how to play and its rules. Bbecause I had played before. The beginning of the match was a warm up round. We shootshot each other from long ranges and we rarely got out from the covered area. Then I, who was as leader of the team, decided to rush attack from the left wings for a direct attack towards the flag. I told my plan to my team friends. They said “ok”.
The Referee started the round, and I runran to the left wing. Then I looked at my friends, they were staying at the line at the back line ! This was like a betrayal.
Then I looked at the enemy flag and took a deep breath. And I started to run from left wing to the flag. An enemy spotted ! I hit him and he couldn’t hit missed me. Then I continued to run. and spotted another enemy spotted,. Again I hit him before he could hit me. AndBy that time, I was behind of the enemy lines.
All of the enemy were yelling “ Hit him, hit him”., but they were sotoo late. I touched the capture flag while I was falling down.
Score The match was ours. I like paintball. ;)
Nice! I never tried paintball but did a lot of airsoft back in the UK in the woods with my friends. Wet cold and painful but very very fun. So much adrenaline :)
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