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New Project. One day, one post. I'm going to improve my English with writing. I'm planning with writing a post/day. It might be a question to improve my grammar and a short paragraph in English. I hope I get be a better writer and I invite you all to take a look of my work and give comments. I'd like to get any corrections and suggestions to make my writing better. So tonight, I will just declare my mission here. Keep studying and good luck for us! Regards, Elisa.

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New Project. One day, one post.

I'm going to improve my English with writing. I'm planning with writing a post/day. It might be a question to improve my grammar and or a short paragraph in English. I hope I get to be a better writer and I invite you all to take a look of my work and give comments. I'd like to get any corrections and suggestions to make my writing better.
So tonight, I will just declare my mission here.
Keep studying and wish good luck for us!


Regards,
Elisa.

 

Note: Since you are only writing one post a day, changed and to or.

"with" use was unnecessary

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Very good English already

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New Project. One day, one post.

I'm going to improve my English with writing. I'm planning with writing to write a post/day. It might be a question to improve my grammar, and a short paragraph in English. I hope I get to be a better writer and I invite you all to take a look of at my work and give comments. I'd like to get any corrections and suggestions to make my writing better.
So tonight, I will just declare my mission here.
Keep studying and good luck for us!


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Ah, I see.. thank you for the explanation! :)
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Yes, You need not say: I'm going to improve my English with writing You can just say : I'm going to improve my English writing. Also, you need not say: I'm planning with writing a post/day You just say: I'm planning writing a post/day
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Thank you Pankaj :) But I don't understand with this statement: "Since you are only writing one post a day, changed and to or "with" use was unnecessary. Do you mean, the word "with" isn't necessary in my paragraph?

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