Good Weekend
The weekend It's made for enjoy it!!!
The weekend begins, I really like to spend the weekend with my family and friends. My friend Guillermo comes my house today to have a cup of coffe with his wife and son.
Tomorrow I will travel to Granada. Have you ever traveled to Granada? Granada is really beauty.
In my next post I talk you more about Granada.
Bye,
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Good Weekend
The weekend It's is made for enjoy it!!! enjoyment!
The weekend begins! I really like to spend the weekend with my family and friends. My friend Guillermo along with his wife and son comes came to my house today to have a cup of coffe. with his wife and son. <-- take note how I moved this to the beginning (behind your name) in the sentence
Tomorrow, I will travel to Granada. Have you ever traveled <--- there is no need to mention the word traveled again been to Granada? Granada is really beauty.
In my next post I will talk you more about Granada.
Bye,
I hope this helps,
Jerry (English Teacher/Tutor)
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