Skating

I went to the rink today with my friends . I hadn't skated since high school. I was kind of [1] afraid of going down there. There were always were some guys showing off there. But we had a lot of fun！! 

Please check my writing ，,  thanks.

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[1] If you write an English essay for university, avoid the phrases "kind of" and "sort of" when you actually mean "a little".  You could write, "I was a little afraid of going there," or, "I was apprehensive about going there."

There is no space before a comma (',') or a full stop ('.').  Also, be sure to use English punctuation marks, not Chinese punctuation characters.

Skating

I went to the rink today with my friends . I haven't skated since high school. I was kind of afraid of going down there. There always were some guys showing off there. But we had a lot of fun！

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Please check my writing, thanks.