Doing volunteer works makes me happy
I am now doing some volunteer works and this kind of life really makes me very happy. My everyday life is enriched and my vision is broadened during the process of being a volunteer.
Yesterday I gave a lecture to the high school students. They are very lovely and eager to learn. It turned out that I have worried too much before I went to the school. The students were well behaved in the class and many girls asked me to take pictures with them. I think they like me very much:)
It's really an impressive experience and I hope I could have a chance to meet the students again:)
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Doing volunteer works makes me happy
I am now doing some volunteer works and this kind of life ( this kind of experience may be a better way to say this) really makes me very happy. My everyday life is enriched and my vision is broadened during the process of being a volunteer.
Yesterday I gave a lecture to the high school students. They are were very lovely and eager to learn. It turned out that I have had worried too much before I went to the school. The students were well behaved in the class and many girls asked me to take pictures with them. I think they like me very much:)
It's really an impressive experience and I hope I could can have a chance to meet the students again:)
Using emotion icons :) :( is not acceptable in formal conversation. You can use it in informal conversations ( talking with friends.)
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Thank you Pankaj Vaudya. Your advise is helpful to me. Volunteer work can also make my life meaningful :)
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"They were very lovely" is better.
But "They are very lovely" is not completely wrong in this context.
So, don't worry about it too much.
I admire people who do volunteer work and thats why the first line of your notebook entry caught my attention.
Want to suggest a correction in your intoduction.
"I want to improve my oral English." is correct but "I want to improve my spoken English." would sound better in this context.
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Thank you Hawi. I will correct it and pay more attention on tense:)
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Since you are writing about something that has already happened, you should be consistent with your tense. For example, in your second paragraph, it should be "They WERE very lovely..."
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