A personal experience of migration

Most of people fled from the conflict zone and took refuge in neighboring countries. Ethnic and religious minorities were uprooted so that and their houses were assigned to extremists, so they (who is "they"? extremists or minorities?) built up a new neighborhood. People who were discriminated against applied for asylum.

In my native country, there is prejudice against religious minorities. Unfortunately we were discriminated against for our studies and social activities. When I applied for an asylum I was afraid and disappointed. But when I moved here, people accepted who I am. They have seen beyond stereotypes so in return I have tried to live at peace with my neighbors and helped them in any way. I tried to integrate into my new society and I get accustomed to the new culture, but I still have a feeling of nostalgia for my native country. I'm not hopeless and I'm sure one day I'll be back there to rebuild my home and take my rights.

This is a very good explanation -- very clear and interesting to read. My major suggestion is to remember to use a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence, and also to put a space before the capital letter.  I tell my students that if an English speaker sees you write without capital letters, they will not take you seriously!  :)  Also remember to capitalize the word "I".