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That strange sound Sometimes he felt his heart was dead. He sometimes felt his body fell into a dark and deep hollow. He lived a average life with his mother and his father; his home was a safe place where he could come back when he wanted. All seemed normal in his life, except that, in his own mind all was messed - up. He didn't recall why he feel like this, but he was always thinking about those feelings of lonely and despair.. He tried to tell his parents about that but, when he opened his mouth to speak. his tongue came a standstill and his breaths disappeared. Anyway, what can he talk about? Even he didn't understand why he felt like this. But one day, while he was studying in the library, he listened a strange sound, it was almost imperceptible with a soft sound, in fact he thought he was the only one who had listened it, because anyone looked like they listened something. That sound was like if the wind was whistling inside the library, but far, far away. At first, that sound made he felt goose bumps but, inevitably he stood up and went to the sound came from. His steps makes a bit noise when he walked on the wood floor of the old library. He tried to don't make noise because he wouldn't want that the thing that was making so strange whistle, disappeared until he came there. But when he arrived at the place where he thought the thing was waiting for him, he just saw a small hallway full of old books and a guy who, at that moment, was reading a book, absolutely absorved in his own thoughts. Our boy looked around the place, looking for that corner or part of the hallway where the wind sounded. He didn't found it. Then he thought, "Crap... What am I here? I'm just wasting my time with stupid things. But just when our boy was going to return to his table with his books, that guy called him. "Hey, you, come here" Haven't you listened something by chance? Ours boy felt a strange shiver in his back, but even though he didn't want to go there, inside, into his heart, something started to thump very strong. Never in whole his life felt his heart pumped this way, indeed, he'd thought that his heart was dead for long time ago. Maybe he felt scared but he need to know what it was all that. His first step made a sound when he walked in the wood of floor of this old library.

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That strange sound

Sometimes he felt as if his heart was dead. He sometimes felt his body fall into a dark and deep hollow.
He lived an average life with his mother and his father; his home was a safe place where he could come back when he wanted. All seemed normal in his life, except that, in his own mind all was messed-up.
He didn't recall why he felt like this, but he always felt lonely and in despair..
He tried to tell his parents about this but when he opened his mouth to speak his tongue came to a standstill and his breath disappeared.
Anyway, what can he talk about? Even he couldn't understand why he felt like this.
But one day, while he was studying in the library, he heard a strange sound. It was almost imperceptible - a soft sound, in fact he thought he was the only one who had heard it, because nobody looked like they heard anything.
That sound was as if the wind was whistling inside the library, but far far away.
At first, that sound made him feel goose bumps but, eventually he stood up and went to where the sound came from.
His steps made a bit of noise when he walked on the wood floor of the old library. He tried to not make any noise because he didn't want the thing that was making the strange whistle to disappear until he got there.
However, when he arrived at the place where he thought the thing was waiting for him, he just saw a small hallway full of old books and a guy who was reading a book, absolutely absorbed in that moment and his own thoughts.
He looked around the place, looking for that corner or part of the hallway where the sound like the wind came from. He couldn't find it.
Then he thought, "Crap... What am I doing here? I'm just wasting my time with stupid things".,
but just when he was going to return to his table with his books, the guy called him.
"Hey, you! Come here" Haven't you heard anything by chance?
He felt a strange shiver in his back, but even though he didn't want to go there, inside his heart something started to thump very hard. 
Never in his whole life had he felt his heart pump this way: indeed, he'd thought that his heart was dead a long time ago.
He might have felt scared but he still needed to know what it was all about.
His first step made a sound as he walked on the wooden floor of this old library.

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