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19.11.2014 - Email Dear Mr. moving man Ciao, Pietro :) I am very happy about your work going well. You are always a successful man in your job, so your recent achievement is not that surprising, actually :) You've tried everything to make your job successful. That's why I always admire and respect you. I got home 1 hour ago. I finished my today's classes early, but I stayed at school to join an extracurricular class.That class was for students to think in a philosophic way. It was about how to think about our lives in everyday life. The lecturer was quite aware of human kinds' laziness and helplessness in everyday life. If we don't awake ourselves, we must be lived by some artificial desires.The artificial desires mean that people are instigated and deceived by mass media-especially we find the examples on TV commercials. Majority of TV commercials incessantly evoke new desires that haven't existed before and they encourage people to feel superior if people purchase their products. Also, he said that we should be a stranger in our everyday lives to find something extraordinary and uncommon. That's possible only if we step aside from our chores and think again about what we've taken for granted. If we can't find something new in daily life, we don't live a life anymore but we are just wasting our lives. Except some dramatic occasions, there must be some realizations or discovery by our new thinking ways. Most of masterpieces in Arts and Literature seem to be based on this kind of thinking way ; Don't leave everything in our lives go as always. There must be something which can sprout out in the future though we cannot find it right now. Our mission is to find it in our lives though it might take the entire life for someone. It is getting cold. I don't know why I feel cold more than other people. It might be because my mind has a lot of empty space which cannot block wild wind from outside. I hope all of your work will be finished up :) Kiss, Minju

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19.11.2014 - Email

Dear Mr. moving man

Ciao, Pietro :)
I am very happy about your work going well.
You are always a successful man in your job, so your recent achievement is not that surprising, actually :)
You've tried everything to make your job successful. That's why I always admire and respect you.

I got home 1 hour ago. I finished my today's classes early, but I stayed at school to join an extracurricular class.That class was for to teach students to think in a philosophic way. It was about how to think about our lives in everyday life. The lecturer was quite aware of human kinds' humankind's laziness and helplessness in everyday life. If we don't awaken to ourselves, we must be lived by some live by artificial desires.The artificial desires mean that people are instigated and deceived by mass media-especially we find the examples on TV commercials. The mMajority of TV commercials incessantly evoke new desires that haven't existed before and they encourage people to feel superior if people purchase their products. Also, he said that we should be a stranger in our everyday lives to find something extraordinary and uncommon. That's possible only if we step aside from our chores and think again about what we've taken for granted. If we can't find something new in daily life, we don't live a are not living life anymore, but we are just wasting our lives. Except some Even without dramatic occasions, there must be some realizations or discoveryies by our new thinking ways from our new way of thinking. Most of the masterpieces in the Aarts and Lliterature seem to be based on this kind of thinking way; Ddon't leave everything in our lives to go (continue?) as always. There must be something realization which can sprout out manifest itself in the future though we cannot find it right now. Our mission is to find it in our lives, though it might take the one's entire life for someone.

It is getting cold. I don't know why I feel the cold more than other people. It might be because my mind has a lot of empty space which cannot block wild wind from outside.

I hope all of your work will be finished up you finish up all your work :)

Kiss,
Minju

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