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My Family I´ve got a big family. I´ve got my mother and my father, two sisters, called Rosa and Raquel, and a brother called José. My father is 70 and he´s a farmer, my mother is 68 and she´s a housewife. My sister, Rosa, is a teacher, she´s 45, Raquel is a housewife, she´s 44, José is an employee and he´s 30. Rosa has got a son and a daughter, they are 14 and 9 years old. Raquel has got a son, a daughter and twins. José has got a son and a daughter. They are 9 and 3 years old. I live with my husband, David, and my two children, David and Isabella. My husband is an employee and he´s a hardworking, helpful and generous man. My kids are 7 and 3 years old. My son is a sweet, tender and clever boy. He loves drawing and playing football. My daughter is a restless but very affectionate, caring and helpful little girl. She loves dancing and singing.

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My Family

I´ve got a big family. I´ve got my mother and my father, two sisters called Rosa and Raquel, and a brother called José. My father is 70 and he´s a farmer; my mother is 68 and she´s a housewife. My sister, Rosa, is a teacher, she´s 45; Raquel is a housewife, she´s 44; José is an employee and he´s 30. Rosa has got a son and a daughter, they who are 14 and 9 years old respectively. Raquel has got a son, a daughter and twins. José has got a son and a daughter. They are 9 and 3 years old.
I live with my husband, David, and my two children, David and Isabella. My husband is an employee and he´s a hardworking, helpful and generous man. My kids are 7 and 3 years old. My son is a sweet, tender and clever boy who He loves drawing and playing football. My daughter is a restless, but very affectionate, caring and helpful little girl.
She loves dancing and singing.

 

Very good, Inés.

Just be careful with separating clauses.

Employee? Un empleado de una empresa, pero ¿puedes decir algo más concreto? Suena un poco raro. En general, muy bien hecho.

Saludos:

Simón.

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