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italki Student Activity - Art is in the Eye of the Beholder I’m absolutely agree with the author of this article. The art is personal and totally free, for me is an expression way. You can express your feeling or to tell something through the words, painting, drawing, dancing, theater...for many people it's necessary to communicate with the world. So I think it should be impossible that few persons decide for you about what kind of art must be valued or considered like art. The industry is the intermediate between the artist and the other people and has the power for decide what artist can be listened and manipulate the opinion of the public. So there are many good artists with important messages that never will be listened while the rest of the people are admiring some things that don't understand. It make me angry, it's better to be honest and to say 'I don't like this picture' than try to seems intelligent and give an opinion about something that in reality you don't understand or don't like it. Fortunately, there are artists trying to producer themselves. So it's the people who decide about their likes and to connect feelings and ideas. But on the other hand a part the industry are helping many artists selflessly and are always betting for a new talents. I think Andy Warhol was very clever and he could enjoy his success in life.

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Hi Julia, thanks for answering the activity (http://www.italki.com/entry/491567)

 

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italki Student Activity - Art is in the Eye of the Beholder

I’m absolutely agree with the author of this article. The Art is personal and totally free of limits, and for me it is an form of [sometimes when we want to say "way" we really mean form or type] expression way. You can express your feelings or to tell say something through the words, painting, drawing, dancing, theater...for many people it's necessary to communicate with the world. So I think it should be impossible that a few people decide for you about what kind of art must should be valued or considered like as art for you.

The industry is the intermediary between the artist and the other people public and has the power for decide what which artist can be listened heard and they manipulate the opinions of the public.
So there are many good artists with important messages that will never will be listened heard while the rest of the people are everyone else is admiring some things they don't understand.

It makes me angry, and I think it's better to be honest and to say 'I don't like this picture' than try to seems intelligent and give an opinion about something that in reality you don't understand or don't like it.

Fortunately, there are artists trying to producer promote themselves, so it's the people who decide about their what they likes and to connect their/those feelings and ideas.

But on the other hand, a part of the industry are is helping many artists selflessly and are always betting on finding [I love that you have tried to use betting in this context. Well done] for a new talents.

I think Andy Warhol was very clever and he could was able to enjoy his success in life.

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italki Student Activity - Art is in the Eye of the Beholder

I’m I absolutely agree with the author of this article. Art is personal and totally free, for me it is an a expression way  way to express yourself. You can express your feelings or to tell something through the words, paintings, drawings, dancing, theater,..., etc. For many people it's necessary to communicate with the world. So I think it should be impossible tha for few persons someone to decide for you tell you what kind of art must be valued or what should be considered like art. 

The industry is the intermediate intermediary between the artists and the other people the audience. and They have the power for to decide what which artists can be listened to and manipulate the opinion of the public.

 

So There are many good artists with important messages that never will never be listened heard while the rest of the people others are admiring some things that they don't understand.

It makes me angry, it's better to be honest and to say 'I don't like this picture' than try to seems intelligent and give an opinion about something that in reality you don't understand or don't like it.

Fortunately, there are artists trying to producer themselves. So it's the people audience who decide what about their likes are and to connect their own feelings and ideas with the artist's.

But on the other hand, a part some parts of the industry are helping many artists selflessly and are always betting looking for a new talents.

I think Andy Warhol was very clever and he could enjoyed his success in life.

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Yes, my dear, those kids' drawings are hard to imitate even though some grown ups thinks it's easy to draw like kids;) And about the language, your entry was easy for me to understand, so keep up the good work Julia (,")
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Thanks Mumtaz! for my it's difficult give my opinion en other language and likely this topic is difficult in Spanish as well! :) So your office is full of true art!!!
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I enjoyed reading Julia :) And the photo you attached here reminded me of my office, it's full of kids drawings (,")

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