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Environmental concerns Today I was seeing photos about the effects of climate change. It's not new for me to know about this kind of issues but, today, I was thinking about the progress that we made the last years in connection with this topic. Logically, I think that what we did all these years was insufficient to stop the consequences that we are having. The risk becomes an actual disaster and a future chaos for sure. But, which is the best project to stop the environment degradation? While the oil still rules the world, and multinationals can't take their eye off it, it's impossible to change our reality. The possibility of renewal energy is there, is a fact. It must to be a priority for governments as well as the reduction of poverty. But it must to be a priority for us to, if it is a real democracy, we are part of the government.

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     I saw climate change photographs today. The issue of climate change is not new to me, but I was thinking about the progress that we have made over these last years. What was done has been insufficient. Climate change is a disaster and a chaotic future is assured.
     Oil rules the world today, and Multinationals can't take their eyes off of it, but we can change this. The possibility of renewable energy replacing fossil fuels must be made a priority for governments -- along with poverty reduction. It must be a priority for us too, because if this is a real Democracy; we are a part of our government. 

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Environmental concerns

Today I was seeing saw photos about the effects of climate change. It's not new for me to know about this these kinds of issues but, today, I was thinking about the progress that we made the last years in connection with this topic. Logically, I think that what we did all these years was insufficient to stop the consequences that we are having. The risk becomes an actual disaster and a future chaos for sure. (Try not to begin a sentence with "But")But, which is the best project to stop the environmental degradation? While the oil still rules the world, and multinationals can't take their eyes off it, it's impossible to change our reality. The possibility of renewal renewable energy is there, this/it is a fact. It must to be a priority for governments as well as the reduction of poverty. But it must to be a priority for us too, if it is a real democracy, we are part of the government.

 

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Sometimes, nay, often, fanatical religion is used as a tool to dominate people too. Sometimes little girls are forced into marriages with grown men; sometimes girls and women are sold as slaves; sometimes people are stoned; sometimes they are beheaded. /// I guess there is more than one to dominate others.
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Today democracy doesnt rule.It's just a tool to dominate people.it's shedding blood everyday because of oil in the middle east.Multinationals dont care about that.They just care about money.That's all,neither environment nor innocent people

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