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Daily commute Hello everyone! Please, correct my grammar and vocabulary errors!:) Every citiezen knows what it means to comute daily. This is an average of 2 hours a day, 10 hours a week, which is 480 hours. That is a lot of time! How are we wasting this time? Сurrently, a person's success is often determined by the skills he possesses. However also modern people do not have time to learning. Нow they could make their life productively? Personally, I believe that daily commuting is perfect time for learning. First, learning in transport can distract you from such irritants as: traffic jam, unhappy people etc. Moreover you will learn to concentrate in stressful conditions. Do you think that learning in transport is heavy and boring? Currently there is a huge number of ways to learn as: video tutorials, audiobooks, interactive apps. Сhoose yours! On the other hand, learning in transport can be ineffective or even harmful. For example, if you read in a vibrating transport, there is a risk to spoil vision. But I am convinced, that commute can be used to learn. Used your commuting time to be productive man.

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Daily commute

Hello everyone!

Please, correct my grammar and vocabulary errors!:)

Every citizen knows what it means to comute daily. This is 2 hours a day, 10 hours a week, and turns to 480 hours a year in average. That is a lot of time! How are we wasting this time?
Сurrently Nowadays, a person's success is often determined by the skills he possesses. However modern people often do not have time to for learning. Нow could they make their life more productive? Personally, I believe that daily commuting is perfect time for learning.
Firstly, learning in transport can distract you from such irritants(better irritating things) as: traffic jam, unhappy people etc. Moreover you will (better could) learn to concentrate in stressful conditions.
Do you think that learning in transport is heavy and boring? Currently there is a huge number of ways to learn. It may be some video tutorials, audiobooks or interactive apps. Сhoose yours!

On the other hand, learning in transport can be ineffective or even harmful. For example, if you read in a vibrating transport, there is a risk to corrupt vision.

But I am convinced that commuting can be used for learning. Used your commuting time to be(better become)more productive man.

 

PS: Almost perfect from my point of view but I can't say my correction is perfect.

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