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I lived in a small town on the edge of two cities, with a highway across it from the east to the west. It was so small that a five-minute's drive would finish the trip of the town drive was all it took to travel across town.
It was quiet in the morning; only several dog barks the barking of several dogs could be heard. As the sun rose, sunshine overshined it shone on the rooves, ground, and leaves in the maize field, bringing everything to life. Smoke wreathed upward from kitchen chimneys, picturing depicting the beauty in ancient Chinese poems.
As the sun rose, streets became busy, filled with parents seeing their children to school, working people hurrying to work, buses running crowdedly on moving through the crowded, narrow streets. When it got Later, the mall in the center of the town was the most noisy and popular place of the town to be.
When the sun reached rose high, the sound of students' reading would be replaced by the students' laughing. School uniforms would be could be seen all over the town as it was time for students to go home and have lunch, where I had my part for six years.
At dusk, people headed home from wherever they were in the daytime. Smoke rose again, the town went became golden and then quiet. The day ended as the night took charge, with another peaceful morning around the corner.
I lived in a small town on the edge of two cities, with a highway across it from east to west. It was so small that a five-minute drive was all it took to travel across town.
It was quiet in the morning; only the barking of several dogs could be heard. As the sun rose, it shone on the rooves, ground, and leaves in the maize field, bringing everything to life. Smoke wreathed upward from kitchen chimneys, depicting the beauty in ancient Chinese poems.
As the sun rose, streets became busy, filled with parents seeing their children to school, working people hurrying to work, buses moving through the crowded, narrow streets. Later, the mall in the center of town was the most noisy and popular place to be.
When the sun rose high, the sound of students' reading would be replaced by the students' laughing. School uniforms could be seen all over town as it was time for students to go home and have lunch, where I had my part for six years.
At dusk, people headed home from wherever they were in the daytime. Smoke rose again, the town became golden and then quiet. The day ended as night took charge, with another peaceful morning around the corner.
My Hometown
I was living lived in a small town on the edge of two cities, with a highway across it from it's the east to the it's west. It was so small that tha a five-minute's drive would finish the trip of the town.
It was quiet in the morning,only several dogs barking s could be heard. As the sun rose, sunshine overshined the roofs, ground, and leaves in the maize field, bringing everything to life. Smoke wreathed up from kitchen chimneys, picturing the beauty in ancient Chiness poems.
As the sun rose, streets became busy, filled with parents partens seeing their children to school, Workers working people harrying hurring to thier work , buses running crowded ly on narrow streets. When it got later, the mall in the center of the town was the most noisy and popular place on of the town.
When the sun rose or became reached high, the sound soudn of students' reading would be replaced by the students' laughing. School uniforms would be all over the town as it was time for students to go home and have a lunch, where I had my part for six years.
At dusk, people returned or came back headed home from wherever they were in the daytime. Smoke rose again, the town went golden and then quiet. A day ended as the night took charge, with another peaceful morning around the corner.
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