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Seeing is not believing -- a call of real me (speech draft) Recently I attended a party of my primary school classmates. Years of separation made us surprised at each other’s great change, especially when I met a beautiful girl, I even cannot believe that she’s my front desk classmate. How come the previous ordinary girl suddenly possesses such a straight nose and bright eyes? I couldn’t help to show my admiration to her. However, later my classmates told me that she has did the cosmetic surgery. I was shocked. Ladies and gentlemen, what kind of girl do you think is beautiful? Those who with big bright eyes and sweet smile? Indeed, they are beautiful. But not everyone is so lucky to have the genetic advantage. So the cosmetic surgery quickly gained its popularity these days. However, what we saw is only their beautiful face and what is under their face, for instance, their quality and knowledge, still remains unknown. It is true that everyone has their right to pursue beauty, but the definition of beauty should not be distorted or narrowed. Beauty does not only represents one’s good look, but also one’s rich inner beauty. What really accounts is the inner beauty of the “real me”. An experienced lady would be confident at any big occasion; a knowledgeable lady would speak with fervor and assurance when she’s making a speech; a humanitarian lady would demonstrate her attraction all the time. All of them catches people’s eyes and wins the admiration, thus they can be regarded as pretty as well or maybe even more beautiful. A woman with her marvelous inner abilities can be beautiful and conversely a good-looking lady without endeavor and persistent is meaningless. In fact, the inner beauty and the superiority in appearance are complementary. Madame Curie is said to be a beautiful female scientist. Her well-known beauty and great contribution to the field of physics and chemistry were so sensational. Her beauty is adding brilliance to her splendid achievements and her success made her beauty more legendary. This is the perfect idol of “real me”. The cosmetic surgery could only help us change what we look like, but the temperament cannot be changed by the surgery. What we should do is to remain the trueness of ourselves. Let us go back to ourselves and confirm what our real destination is and enrich our inner beauty. One day, people would not only appreciate your seeing but also believing your ability. One day, seeing would get rid of its superficial definition and make everyone believing. Thanks you!

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( Hi, evevryone. I particiapated in an English speech competition and the theme of this speech is "Seeing is not believing". This is my speech draft. However, I found this draft somehow a little bit far away from the theme. Can anybody help me to correct the grammar mistakes and make it better? Thank you all.)

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