Resort

“Tropical Paradise Mountain and Beach Resort”
In 1996 Diogenes Turbi and his daughter Nathali purchased 320 acres along the Yaque del norte river, where The Resort now lies. Nearby, native dominicans from many tribes picked coffee and cocoa during the whole year. The Turbi continued to acquire land in the area until they owned roughly 1,000 acres. In 1999 father and daughter began the first resort, which was a campground for travellers and vacationers. In 2002 Diogenes died and Nathali inherited the entire property.
In 2003 Nathali started her own business and builts a two-story hotel called “Tropical resort”. It was the sensation at the momento time because it was the first hotel in the zone. Three years later, Nathali became one of the richest person people in the Dominican Republic. So, she decided to enjoy the rest of her life. She started to spend her Money as much as possible, without thinking in about her future. 4 years later she filed for bankruptcy.
The Arias family made her a good proposal, and inmediatedly she accepted. Rafael Arias, being a generous person, asked Nathali to continue being part of the hotel becoming she its vice-president. Inmediatedly, the two businessmen started working together.

COMMENTS:

Person = non-plural form of people. (i know it's strange and stupid :) Since your referring to richest (something/ somebody) it sounds more natural to say "one of the richest people...." if you wanted to say "person" = She became a rich person.

that's it!!! brilliant