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My Favorite Season Autumn is my favorite season. Leaves changing beautiful red color, we can see fantastic scenery day and night in Japan. Especially, Kyoto is the best place to enjoying fabulous scenery. The climate here is easy to live in during autumn in Japan. And also we are able to enjoying special to Japanese autumn foods. For example, SANMA(Pacific saury), Asian pears, TAKIKOMI-GOHAN (rice seasoned with soy sauce and boiled with meat or seafood, and other savory vegetables) so on. If you have a chance to come to Japan in the future, I recommend you visit during autumn.

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My Favorite Season

Autumn is my favorite season.
Leaves are changing to (a) beautiful red color, we can see fantastic scenery days and nights in Japan.
Especially, Kyoto is the best place to enjoying fabulous scenery.

The climate here is easy to live in during autumn in Japan.

(The Japan's climate is easy to live during autumn.)


And also we are able to enjoying special to(?) Japanese autumn foods.
For example, SANMA(Pacific saury), Asian pears,
TAKIKOMI-GOHAN (rice seasoned with soy sauce and boiled with meat or seafood, and other savory vegetables)and so on.

If you have a chance to come to Japan in the future, I recommend to visit during autumn to you.

 

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Visiting Japan is my desire!

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My Favorite Season

Autumn is my favorite season.
Leaves changeing to a beautiful red-gold color, we can see fantastic scenery day and night in Japan.
Especially in Kyoto/Particularly Kyoto, that is the best place for enjoying/to enjoy fabulous scenery.

The climate here in Japan is easy to live in with during/throughtout autumn in Japan.

And also we are able to enjoying special to Japanese autumn foods.
For example, SANMA(Pacific saury), Asian pears,
TAKIKOMI-GOHAN (rice seasoned with soy sauce and boiled with meat or seafood, and other savory vegetables) so on.

If you have a chance to come to Japan in the future, I recommend you visit during autumn.

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