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Modern family Recently I'm watching an English play named Modern Family. The large family consists three mini families.The first, grandpa Jay, his young wife and his stepson Manny.The second, father Phil, mother Claire, older sister Haley-she's a school beauty but poor in homework, young sister Alex-she's very smart but poor in sociality, the little boy Luke-he's cute but stolid. The third, Cam and Mitchel, two married gays, and their adopted daughter Lily. The play is so funny , and every episode has a meaningful topic hi friends, I just can use simple sentences to express, but if you have a better , plese give me a hand, thank you very much

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Modern family

Recently I'm watching I have been watching an English play named Modern Family. The large family consists of three mini/smaller families. The first family consists of Grandpa Jay, his young wife and his stepson Manny. The second family consists of father Phil, mother Claire, older sister Haley (she's a school beauty but poor in bad at homework), young sister Alex (she's very smart but poor in sociality she isn't popular/has poor social skills), the little boy Luke (he's cute but stolid). The third family consists of Cam and Mitchel, two married gays, and their adopted daughter Lily. The play is so funny and every episode has a meaningful topic.


hi friends, I just can use I can only use/I only know how to use simple sentences to express, but if you have a better structure/form, plese give me a hand, thank you very much.

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Modern Family

Recently I'm I have been [1] watching an English American play television series [2] named Modern Family. The large family consists of three mini separate families.  The first, has grandpa Jay, his young wife and his stepson, Manny.  The second, has father Phil, mother Claire, older sister Haley, she's a school beauty but poor in homework, young sister Alex, she's very smart but poor in sociality social skills, and the little boy, Luke, he's cute but stolid. The third, has Cam and Mitchell, two married gays, and their adopted daughter, Lily. The play series is so funny , and every episode has a meaningful topic.


Hi, friends. I just can only use simple sentences to express myself, but if you have a better expression, please give me a hand. Thank you very much.

 

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[1] The word 'recently' means "the recent past".  Therefore you must use the past tense in your sentence.

[2] A 'play' is where you go to a theatre and watch live actors on a stage.

 

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You are expressing yourself very well.  If you can watch and understand Modern Family, you're doing great!

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Modern Family is a TV show, but yeah the correction covers it all :) I love Modern Family so much! Phil is the funniest character!

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