Hello Hugh, 

It sounds like you might need a new tutor. If you don't understand what your tutor is saying, then you should find a tutor who speaks some Mandarin, or a tutor who has more patience and a better accent. Remember, you don't have to keep going back to a tutor who can't help you. 

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The Importance of Writing Articles in English [in titles we capitalise main words]

It had was already been thirty minutes past zero o clock midnight, and I do not know why I am still stay up beyond midnight.

Maybe I'm too excited to get sleepy be tired if when I see someone has [use present tense] corrected my articles. It makes me very So happy I am.

From now on, keeping on writing articles in English will be one of the most longing important/interesting things of mine I do.

When talking with my teacher, I feel one hours duration is not really enough to study. What I really want to say is for a lot of [in the next sentence you mention "less", so a lot of is perfect here] examples. The last time I took session with my tutor, I found l had only learned less sentences than my I expected.

Maybe writing an article is a faster way to learn how to use native expressions than talking to a/the tutor for the simple reason that most of the time I cannot understand what the tutor is saying. It is really is troublesome. Whatever, I just want to say, if you are eager to improve your English skill, you must never give up writing English.

I hope one day I could will be able to describe everything in English and without any hesitations. 

One day I would like to speak say it as fluently as a native speaker.
That is a my target for there a meaningful life.

The importance of writing articles in English.

It had already been half past twelve in the morning. I do not know why I still stay up beyond midnight.
Maybe I'm too excited to sleep, when I see someone had corrected my articles, I am so happy. 
From now on, writing articles in English will always be on my mind.
When talking with a teacher, I feel one hour's duration is not really enough to study. What i really want, for example, last time I had a session with my tutor, I found l learned less sentences then my expectation.
Maybe writing an article is a faster way to learn how to use native expressions than talking to a tutor, for the simple reason most of time I cannot understand what the tutor is saying. It is really troublesome. Whatever, I just want to say,
if you are eager to improve your English skill, you must never give up writing English~
I hope one day, I can describe everything In English and without any hesitations.
one day I hope to speak as fluent as a native speaker.
There is a target.