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Everyone Should Be Given an Opportunity to Study in College Everyone has the equal right to receive education, college is a part of education, so everyone should be given an opportunity to study in college. With the popularization of university education, Increasingly students get opportunities to college, but there are many pepople still couldn't get the opportunity to college. People usually think that only the students who are good at studying and pass the college entrace examination can get into the university. In fact, college is not only the place of study,but also a place that provide conditions to help you find your advantages and develope them. So the students who get low score also should be given an opportunity to study in college. Other people are forced to give up the university because of the expensive tuition, their family can't offer it. Folks like to say that kowledge changes destiny. If the people who were born in the poor family could accept the higher education, they will have abilities to change their destiny, thus, the poor people also should get into the college. There are some people voluntary give up to college. After all, the university is not the only way to study.Whether they use, the right should be given. Everyone should be given an opportunity to study in college, whther they are rich or poor, clever or ordinary.

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Everyone Should Be Given an Opportunity to Study in College

Everyone has the equal right to receive an education, college is part of education, so everyone should be given an opportunity to study in college.
With the popularization of university education, Increasingly students get opportunities to go to college, but there are many pepople still can't get the opportunity to attend college.
People usually think that only the students who are good at studying and pass the college enterence  examination can get into the university. In fact, college is not only a place for study,but also a place that provides facilities(I think that this is a better word for the context of the sentence) to help you find your advantages and develope them. So the students who get a low score also should be given an opportunity to study in college.
Other people are forced to give up going to university because of the expensive tuition, their family can't afford it. Folks like to say that kowledge changes destiny. If the people who were born into a poor family could go on to do a college degree, they will have abilities to change their destiny, thus, the poor people also should get into college.
There are some people voluntary give up to college. After all, the university is not the only way to study.Whether they use, the right should be given. Everyone should be given an opportunity to study in college, whther they are rich or poor, clever or ordinary.

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