Corrections · 7
Study hard and make progress every day
It was raining all day today so I didn't want to go outside. I was so bored, I don't know what to do. I intended to study hard, to get my English caught up, but I end up surfing the Internet the whole day. Every night when I lie in my bed I think about the person that I want to be. I feel very sorry for my parents because I do nothing, for that reason I'm very nervous for my future too. I must start working harder!
我不想将来的自己后悔当初没有努力。
Study hard and make progress every day
It has been rainning all day today. I don't want to go outside. I'm so boring,I don't know what I can do. I intend to study hard, to get my English to catch up.But I surf Internet the whole day.Every night when I lie in my bed,I think the person that I want to be.And then I fell very sorry for my parents.Because I do nothing I'm very nervous for my future too.I must work hard right now.
我不想将来的自己后悔当初没有努力
I am bored(I am so boring........which means I am a boring person)
I don't know what to do(I don't know what I can do.........it's ok but I think mine is better in this context)
hard,to catch up on my English
I think OF the person
And then I FEEL
I feel very sorry for my parents,because I do nothing(put a comma(,) rather than a full stop(.) Also I think in English you are NOT allowed to start a new sentence with the word BECAUSE.
Otherwise I will give you say 7 maybe 8 out of 10.I wish my Spanish was as good as your English.
steve.............from London
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