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I am banana Often I feel troubles for talking with my friend. We worry, peeve and hate themselve. Lately I had talked with my freind. We had discusted any things and suddenly I had understood we were going to brawl. He said " What?'' It is very bad word for talk. If I hear this word, I will say "Banana". Maybe is he forget what we are going to brawl?

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Basic correction

 

I am banana

Often I feel troubled for when talking with my friend. We worry, peeve and hate themselve one another.
Lately I've had talked with my freind. We had discusted many things, and when suddenly I had understood that we were going to brawl. He said, " What?'' It is a very bad word for talk when talking. If I hear this word, I will say "Banana". Maybe is he forget what we are going to brawl?

 

Advanced correction

 

Quite often I am troubled when talking to my friend, because we worry, peeve, and become agrivated with one another.
Last time we talked I became discusted, and realised that we were going to have a brawl. 

He used the word"What?'' in our conversation! In my country, it is bad when someone says "What" in such a way. 

When I hear this I say "Banana".

Maybe he has forgoten that we are going to brawl?

 

Jerry (English Tutor)

 

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good issue, good correction.

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