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winter is coming It's getting cold. My hands are so cold. though my little puppy is sleeping by me in hot bed. I'm preparing for some test to work at the airport. The more I study the more I feel nervous. Anyway, today is a very special day in South Korea. A lot of students are having a test for university. I hope all students get the best score. Time to show what you've studied for It's so hard to write somthing in english :(

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winter is coming

It's getting cold.
My hands are so cold, even though my little puppy is sleeping by me in the hot bed. I'm preparing for a test to work at the airport. The more I study, the more I feel nervous.  (Another way to say it could be "... a test so I can work at the airport", or "...a test for working at the airport".  Also "The more I study, the more nervous I feel" is a better way to say it.)
Anyway, today is a very special day in South Korea.
A lot of students are taking a test for university.
I hope all the students get the best score. (This sounds somewhat awkward.  A better way to say this would be something like: "I hope all the students get a good score." or "I hope all the students do their best.")
Time to show what you've studied for
It's so hard to write something in english :(

 

Good job :)

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Some test?!!!!! Why does that word make the listener think I'm angry? Then what was I supposed to say? Speaking of which, I'm not angry :)
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You are fun! Some test? Yah, ok, this makes the listener think you are angry. :) Now you sound sarcastic when you say "All the students get the best score." because this is not possible. Only some are best while others are not best. Keep going. I like your style!

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