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Can someone correct my expressions???PLEASE
I went to visit Cusco with my friends last month. We traveled by plane. We arrived early in the morning at the city. After, Then we went at to the hotel. We were stayed for a one week. (After cannot stand on its own; for example, "After I did this, I did that" not "After, I did that.")
During my trip I talked with to foreign torusits tourists of from different countries. I like it.
Somebody Some of the tourists were visited visiting Cusco for the first time. They were excited. ("With" is used with "speak," not "talk")
I met touristic places I went to tourist spots as like Sacsashuayma, Ollantaytambo and Urubamba. The most important place is Macchu Picchu. It is wonderful. I bought souvenirs for gift to give to my parents. (You can only "meet" people.)
I enjoyed my trip, because I could I was able to see the most important Inca city of in the world and many landscapes. Also, the people in this city is are very friendly ("People" is plural)
Good job!
I went to Cusco with my friends last month. We traveled by plane. We arrived early in the morning, then we went to our hotel. We were stayed for a week.
During my trip I talked with foreign tourists from different countries. I likeed it.
Some of these tourists wre visiting Cusco for the first time. They were excited.
I went to Sacsashuayma, Ollantaytambo and Urubamba. The most important place was Macchu Picchu. It was wonderful. I bought souvenirs as gift for my parents.
I enjoyed my trip because I could see the most important Inca City in the world and other landscapes. I also enjoyed meeting the people who live in that city. They were very friendly.
Can someone correct my expressions???PLEASE
I went to visit Cusco with my Friends last month. We traveled by plane. We arrived early in the morning at the City in Cusco early in the morning. After, we went at the Hotel. We were stayed for a one week. Afterwards, we went to the hotel and we stayed there for one week.
During my trip I talked with foreign tourists of different countries. I liked it.
Somebody Some of the tourists visited were visiting Cusco for the first time. They were excited.
I met saw such touristic places as Sacsashuayma, Ollantaytambo and Urubamba. The most important place is was Macchu Picchu, it is was wonderful. I bought souvenirs for gift my parents.
I enjoyed my trip because I could got to see the most important Inca City of the world and many landscapes. Also the people in this City is were very friendly.
Your English is pretty good! Mostly just missed the past tense words. Good job!
Last month, I went to visit Cusco with my Friends by plane. We arrived early morning in the city. After, we went to the hotel, where we stayed for one week.
During my trip, I enjoyed talking to foreign tourists from different countries. Some tourists were visiting Cusco for the first time and were excited.
I went to tourist attractions such as Sacsashuayma, Ollantaytambo, and Urubamba. The most famous place is Macchu Picchu. It was wonderful and I bought souvenirs as gifts for my parents.
Overall, I enjoyed my trip, because I was able to see different landscapes and the most important Incan city of the world. Also, the friendly people of the city made my trip enjoyable as well.
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