Who can correct my essay? I wrote it yesterday.

In China, today is double eleven
[If "double eleven" is the special name of a special day, then it should be capitalized - e.g. Double Eleven].

Almost Most people will buy somethings on the Internet , because everything has a big discount today.
Some people even are waiting are even waiting ["even" describes "waiting" so it should be closer to waiting, e.g. still waiting, always waiting, never waiting, etc] for a moment before the compure [do you mean "computer"], when they can buy things and only spend one yuan.

Generally, we choose things which we will buy and put them to in our shoppingcart first, then we can pay for them on the Double Eeleven, because it is so cheap and convenient.

Of course, I also bought a lot of things today,such as clothes, snacks, a vacuum bottle, and a schoolbag. Although the wallet was flatting flattening, I has bought did buy OR bought things which I like, and I am very happy. Today is a special day , also is a crazy day and also a crazy day!

PS: Today is also known as the Singles Day, because the "1" looks like a stick, and the ''1'' also represents a single person OR repsresents a person who is single. I am single, so I have to celebrate this day by shopping on the Internet. HaHa~

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Who can correct my essay? I wrote it yesterday.

In China, today is double eleven. Almost people everybody will buy somethings on the Internet , because everything has a big discount today. Some people even are waiting for a moment before the compure, when they can buy things only spend one yuan. Generally, we choose things which we will buy and put them to our shoppingcar first, then we can pay them on the Double eleven, it is so cheap and convenient. Of course, I also bought a lot of things today,such as clothes, snacks, vacuum bottle, schoolbag. Although the wallet was flatting, I has have bought things which I like,I am very happy. Today is a special day , it is also a crazy day!

PS: Today is also known as the Singles Day, because the "1" like a stick, and the ''1'' also represent single. I am single, so I have to celebrate this day by shopping on the Internet. HaHa~