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I'm sick Today i'm sick.It makes me very uncomfortable。I'm go to go to hospital.but I doesn't want medicine.because it tatse is bed.

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I'm sick

Today, i'm sick.It makes me very uncomfortable。I'm go to go going to hospital but I doesn't want don't want to take medicine because its tatse taste is bad

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Sorry to hear that, hope you feel better.
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I'm sick

Today i'm sick.It makes me very uncomfortable。I'm go to go to hospital.but I doesn't want medicine.because it tatse is bed.

 

Today I'm sick.  It makes me feel very uncomfortable.  I'm going to the hospital, but I don't want to take medicine because it tastes bad.

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I'm sick

Today  i  I'm sick.  It makes me feel very uncomfortable。.  I'm go to going to the hospital.  bBut I doesn't don't want medicine., because its tatse taste is bed bad.

 

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I'm sick

Today i'm sick.It makes me very uncomfortable。I'm going to hospital but I don't want medicine because it taste is bad.

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